From fd64337d1a72c6c7a47970d8505f4dfdaf4e4149 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Henrik Lissner <henrik@lissner.net>
Date: Tue, 11 Feb 2020 18:59:14 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Reformat & revise readme

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 README.md | 34 +++++++++++++++-------------------
 1 file changed, 15 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-)

diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
index b26405a8..13ae44e0 100644
--- a/README.md
+++ b/README.md
@@ -1,6 +1,12 @@
 # Mein dotfiles
 
-A tidy `$HOME` is a tidy mind.
+There are a few, special computers in my life; local and remote. Maintaining
+them was busywork no sane individual wants to do. NixOS tempted me with the
+promise of glorious reproducibility, and declared its declarative-ness with
+enough chutzpah to make anime real again.
+
+XDG conventions in hand, I set out to conquer my white whale and annihilate what
+vestiges of my social life remain.
 
 ![Me looking busy](/../screenshots/fluorescence/fakebusy.png?raw=true)
 
@@ -10,14 +16,13 @@ A tidy `$HOME` is a tidy mind.
 <span><img src="/../screenshots/fluorescence/tiling.png?raw=true" height="188" /></span>
 </p>
 
-It takes a touch of madness to use nixOS. I arrived here because there are a few
-special computers in my life, local and remote, and maintaining them was
-busywork I wouldn't wish on my worst enemy. 
-
-Nix, with its luscious tendrils, drew me in with a promise of glorious
-reproducibility and declared its declarative-ness with enough chutzpah to make
-anime real again. So, with XDG conventions in hand, I set out to conquer my
-white whale and annihilate what vestiges of my social life remain.
++ **Operating System:** NixOS 19.09
++ **Shell:** zsh + zgen
++ **DE/WM:** bspwm + polybar
++ **Editor:** [Doom Emacs][doom-emacs] (and occasionally [vim][vimrc])
++ **Terminal:** st
++ **Launcher:** Rofi
++ **Browser:** Firefox
 
 ## Quick start
 
@@ -26,7 +31,7 @@ white whale and annihilate what vestiges of my social life remain.
 curl https://raw.githubusercontent.com/hlissner/dotfiles/nixos/deploy | sh
 ```
 
-This is equivalent to:
+Which is equivalent to:
 
 ```sh
 DOTFILES=/home/$USER/.dotfiles
@@ -59,15 +64,6 @@ nixos-install --root /mnt -I "my=/etc/dotfiles"
   $PREFIX`
 + `make gc` = `nix-collect-garbage -d` (use sudo to clear system profile)
 
-## Overview
-
-+ OS: NixOS 19.09
-+ Shell: zsh
-+ DE/WM: bspwm + polybar
-+ Editor: [Doom Emacs][doom-emacs] (and occasionally [vim][vimrc])
-+ Terminal: st
-+ Browser: firefox (waiting for qutebrowser to mature)
-
 
 [doom-emacs]: https://github.com/hlissner/doom-emacs
 [vimrc]: https://github.com/hlissner/.vim